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Black Veins

Tangled

By Alyssa NicolePublished about a month ago 1 min read
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Black veins,

Bring the pain.

I'm tired of this feeling,

But I can't stop the bleeding.

I cannot free myself from these tangles.

For the harder I fight the tighter I'm strangled,

By these ropes that I've made myself.

They are hung from the highest shelf.

Mental Healthsad poetry

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Alyssa Nicole

A toxicologist who secretly hopes to be a full-time author. One novel in progress with too many other ideas taking up space in my head until I get around to writing them. Some of those ideas end up here.

Instagram: @alyssa.n.mussowrites

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  • D.K. Shepardabout a month ago

    Love the rhyme in this and the escalating line lengths! And of course the imagery of tangled veins is very striking!

  • Andrea Corwin about a month ago

    Yikes, very somber poem - self-made ropes hung high. Nice job.

  • Sarby Salawie Luwelengabout a month ago

    But I can't stop the bleeding. I cannot free myself from these tangles. For the harder I fight the tighter I'm strangled, By these ropes that I've made myself. Beautiful poem, great work.

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