You, being my lover,
It makes me love you so much.
You resemble a dawn-rising sun.
You make my day brighter like sun beams.
Like the stars in the sky, you bring beauty to me.
You keep me as lively as the oxygen I breathe.
My loneliness no longer exists; you took it away.
You are everything I need in a lover, my best friend.
Losing you is my lifelong worry and weakness.
Can I guarantee your presence in my life?
Can I rest and envision my future with you?
Please let me know where we stand, as our love appears strong.
Let me know if I'm in the wrong spot.
The feeling is like that of the best lover I've ever had.
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>That was a bad idea. I thought you knew… >Oh, the pathos! I don’t really know you as well as I should. In fact, I may not know the real you at all. That essential, sparkling you that you only reveal to a select few. Had I been paying more attention to the stories you are so fond of telling, in which you are invariably author, narrator and protagonist, I would not have been so foolish as to set you up on a blind date. After all, no friend has ever done anything of the kind for another. That’s preposterous. What is a friend, really?
By D. J. Reddall7 days ago in Fiction
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World of imagination in my mind. Couple loves!!!
It's Beautiful! I love it!
Awww this was so sweet! Loved your wonderful poem!
Lovely work!