Bath Time
Rinse Away what 😦 no longer belongs and don't forget to welcome Change!
Last night
I took a Bath with a
Sunflower 🌻 💦
Preparing to Sprout Tomorrow…
I Clinched at the
Strengths of the
Embryo…
Today I let go,
I changed the
Position in which I
will
Germinate…
Bath Time- 💦🦆Helped me Concentrate on what opportunities to manipulate.
Lingering metamorphosis
Conjured me
And I Took
The Bait🌻💦
If it is Bath time,
I hope I'm not too late-
I Disregard the scars of a Broken Heart 💔.
Mirror 🪞 Questions - “Shall, I try this love thing, one more time?”
Bath Time-
Time to Replenish my Sanity.
Bath Time-
Release burdens and Heal.
Bath Time-
The hidden scars must be revealed.
🛁 🧼
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Comments (27)
Great poem
Bath time can be so healing - Nice work!
This, Loui, Lonzo, pal, is up to your usual standard of awesomeness - love baths and love showers and love this piece of poetry! Congrats on Top Story!
Well deserved. Bravo Loui!
great tekst
Congrats on top story!
Congrats lil bro!🎉🎉🎉 Way 2 go!
Hey Lonzo congrats on your bath time top story! 😊👍 💦
Congratulations on Top Story, Lonzo. I particularly loved this one!
Congrats on top story! This felt like a renewal, loved it :)
I know this is about bath time, but it brings to mind the euphoric moment a lot of humans have in the shower. The epiphanies we have when we finally let out brain relax. Great poem Lonzo, and congrats on Top Story! 😊
Loved it. You really do have a magical way with words. Congrats on the Top Story
Ooh this reads so great! I read it twice and dayum, that rhythm! Fave part: "Mirror 🪞 Questions - “Shall, I try this love thing, one more time?” Bath Time- Time to Replenish my Sanity. Bath Time- Release burdens and Heal. Bath Time- The hidden scars must be revealed." Also that pic -- so cute!
congratulations on TS. this is awesome.
Completely relate to this and love your style here my friend 🥰
Congrats on the TS.
Lovely sentiment. Congrats on TS!
“I disregard the scars of a broken heart!” Great line, bro.💖
Always good to start afresh I say ... especially if sunflowers are involved. Good job x
Bath time seems to be very therapeutic! Awesome poem!
Lonzo, love your inspirational poem!!! Awesome job!!! Would love your comment on my story, AFTER THE MISSION.
That's a lovely piece. Well done.
It's either cleanse & be reborn, or slip beneath the surface.
An interesting collection of thoughts and cool lead photo.
Peace vibes ✌️💜