Awkward Senryu
😅😅😅 (Sometimes That's All Can Be Expressed)
They waved at me, and —
I waved back, till they pointed
At someone behind
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Deasun T. Smyth
I’m a First Nations 17 year old young man, probably an old soul (not that there's anything wrong with that). I live in Saskatchewan, and I love reading, writing, conlanging, and collecting sarcastic T-shirts.
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The sun was high when Lance pulled off the road and into the dusty lot of the service station. The sign back at the hairpin--the first sign in a long time--said they just rolled into Hatter’s Creek, Population 63. It was small enough it didn’t appear on the handmap in Shelby’s lap, yet here it stood, the first backwater township on the fringes of the National Park. The plan was to gas up, restock the snack bag, and press on into the wilderness.
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Comments (6)
Guilty of this as well.
Lol, I look behind me if I dont know the person . Great Take on the Challenge. I hope you win .
I've done this wayyyy too many times. Lol. 🤣🤣🤣🤣
Fabulous!!! Loving this!!!💕❤️❤️
Ahhhh yes! And its evil twin- They waved at me, but I glanced over my shoulder. There was no one there.
If I only had a dollar for every time this happened to me. LOL! GREAT job!