Angels in our Midst
Haiku string
I think I know one.
The Bible says they’re here on earth
walking amongst us
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How would we even
Know if there was an angel
Sent here to help us?
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No wings, no feathers
laying around. No halo
hung on the bedpost.
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He can’t play the harp.
No white robe. And he wears shoes.
Only clouds? Angel Soft.
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I’m baffled, intrigued,
Mesmerized by his presence,
Not in love- in awe.
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His heart a deep well,
where Love shines like a beacon
for all to behold.
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Generosity
and compassion abounding
with unknown measure.
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To have an angel
moving in our midst is proof
that God has heard prayers.
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Never stop praying
or having conversation…
I think I know one.
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About the Creator
Colleen Walters
i’m just a girl in Florida who likes to write things, usually inspired by events and people in my life..Always be you, because you are awesome-
When I grow up, I want to be a kid again.
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Congrats for top story!
So beautiful! I also believe angels live among us everpresent.
I love it! I do believe that Angels do live and walk amongst us. It's wonderful! 🙏
I have two photos of the angels flying around the harbor where I live. Yes, they are around us. I have two best friends who I would swear are angels. Yes, I believe they exist and are always around to comfort and guide us.
This is incredible!!!
Wow, beautiful one! I love that you brought back that special line in the end😊
The 5th and the 8th ones are loved by me. Superb my friend 😀😀. By the way, I need a help. I don't know how to update a story as shown below the topic of this Haiku. Please teach it to me my friend 🙏
The lines To have an angel moving in our midst is proof that God has heard prayers....the most beautiful lines....I loved your poem🥰🥰🥰🥰