America's Patchwork
Ekphrastic Challenge April 2023
This poem was written in response to the Rattle® Poetry Ekphrastic Challenge for April 2023 and was ultimately not selected. You can find more information here.
https://www.rattle.com/ekphrastic/
The image that this poem was specifically written about can be found here. (April 2023 – Lou Storey’s “All of Us”)
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America's Patchwork
America, oh beautiful
Come lay your patchwork upon me
Cities stretch their steel fingers
Smoke tendrils to the spacious sky
Factories hum and farms grow
Homes with picket fence awake
Power lines link people
Huddled masses planted
Over all the rolling land
An eclectic mix of faces
A cacophony of tongues
Rises to meet the morning sun
Breaking to fields of grain
Forests and mountains of majesty
Snow-tossed tundra to deserted desert
Oil pump jack and grain silo
The heartland beats
While trains on arteries and veins
Cars and tugboats traverse
Rivers of pavement and water
Lighthouses on rocky shores
Guide comings and goings of ports
From mossy mother to golden gates
The price of the blessings of liberty
Cemeteries of weeping widows
Marble slabs in row upon row
Lives lost for freedom found
Self-evident unalienable rights
And the pursuit of happiness
Passed on to posterity
Carnivals and playgrounds
Of laughing children
Clambering for a better world
A steady march to equality
For all those that come to the shore
Bringing with them their stories
Contributions woven into the fabric
That already breathes across the land
People from distant terra
Yearning for opportunities and dreams
The Lady of New Hope smiles
Arms outstretched, she softly speaks
“America, oh beautiful”
“Come lay your patchwork upon me.”
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Rae Fairchild (MRB)
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Beautifully written!