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This mound holds my world.
I yearn to see your face ... Now,
Waiting's the hard part.
About the Creator
Sonia Heidi Unruh
I love: my husband and children; all who claim me as family or friend; the first bite of chocolate; the last blue before sunset; solving puzzles; stroking cats; finding myself by writing; losing myself in reading; the Creator who is love.
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Comments (5)
Wow! Such a creative poem😮
Ugh, wow, Sonia. Waiting for heaven, for world's end, to see one's world again. Just...sublimely done.
Anticipation was never more lovely or difficult that this.
I love the subtlety here, and how the simplicity of the words says enough but not too much. “Now this mound holds my world” is such a powerful line 👏
Beautiful!!! Love this!!!♥️♥️💕