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Aching to hold you

An inverse haiku

By Sonia Heidi UnruhPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
Aching to hold you
Photo by Ira Vishnevskaya on Unsplash

This mound holds my world.

I yearn to see your face ... Now,

Waiting's the hard part.

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Sonia Heidi Unruh

I love: my husband and children; all who claim me as family or friend; the first bite of chocolate; the last blue before sunset; solving puzzles; stroking cats; finding myself by writing; losing myself in reading; the Creator who is love.

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Comments (5)

  • Anna 4 months ago

    Wow! Such a creative poem😮

  • Mackenzie Davis4 months ago

    Ugh, wow, Sonia. Waiting for heaven, for world's end, to see one's world again. Just...sublimely done.

  • Anticipation was never more lovely or difficult that this.

  • Joe O’Connor5 months ago

    I love the subtlety here, and how the simplicity of the words says enough but not too much. “Now this mound holds my world” is such a powerful line 👏

  • Babs Iverson5 months ago

    Beautiful!!! Love this!!!♥️♥️💕

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