I once was lost
But now
I'm found
Was Blind
But now
I see
The strongholds
Are broken down
The new version
Of me
Is free
the new version of me I see ...
Distance is Dark
Regret is far
Nothing is wrong
If you say
It
from your
HEART
Brand new
Doesn't
Mean
Fresh...
To
Like something
Doesn't
Mean
OBSESS
IM JUST TRYING
TO MAKE
A
GOOD
JUNCTURE
BRING
COLD
INTO
A
HEATED
MOMENT
HOW
ELSE
DID YOU
THINK
I WOULD
FIGHT FIRE
BEING
WRONG
DOESN'T
MEAN
YOUR
DUMB
TAKING
TIME
MEANS
PROCEEDING
WITH
CAUTION
IM
TIRED
BUT
STILL
TRYING
TO MAKE
A
MOMENT!
I
Just
Realized
That
I
Am
The Moment...
Figure
Out
How
To
Turn
A
Poem
Into
A
RIDDLE
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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I really enjoyed this. Very creative and introspective.
This is so interesting. And lovely. I love your use of language and structure, and your message is awesome - powerful. :)