Entering a new era to an unknown orbit
Counting old wounds on my portrait
Leaving places and their weight behind
Instructions for my soul without being kind
Pushing a force outside right from the core
Sparkling with pride and no need for a war
Eclipsed by you no more.
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Thank you for reading! This acrostic poem challenge is becoming addicting :)
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ema
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>That was a bad idea. I thought you knew… >Oh, the pathos! I don’t really know you as well as I should. In fact, I may not know the real you at all. That essential, sparkling you that you only reveal to a select few. Had I been paying more attention to the stories you are so fond of telling, in which you are invariably author, narrator and protagonist, I would not have been so foolish as to set you up on a blind date. After all, no friend has ever done anything of the kind for another. That’s preposterous. What is a friend, really?
By D. J. Reddall7 days ago in Fiction
Comments (5)
The last lines are special. I like the message in them♥️
I like how the rhyme gives this one flow, and how it feels like someone being free to take charge of their life again:)
A universal event inspiring an Individual cosmic level shift. Really, well done, Ema!
That last line packed a punch! Loved your poem!
A nice Eclipse