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Whispers to the Winter Oak

A Tale of Hope in the Heart of Snow

By Abraham VerninacPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
Whispers to the Winter Oak
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In the heart of winter, the village was a snow-globe world, shaken vigorously by an unseen hand. Icy flakes danced like frenzied spirits around the solitary figure trudging through the drifts. Evelyn, a young child, a scarf wound tightly around her face, pressed onward, the old lantern in her hand casting a feeble glow against the encroaching darkness.

Her destination: the ancient oak at the village's edge, where legend whispered of a tree that listened. Villagers scoffed, but Evelyn believed. Each step was a silent plea, a hope against hope.

The oak, a gnarled sentinel, stood defiant against the blizzard's fury. Evelyn, trembling not from cold but from a heart brimming with unspoken dreams, placed her hand on the rough bark. Her voice, barely above a whisper, broke the silence. “I wish for a sign, any sign, that he’s still out there.”

The wind howled in response, snatching her words away. Disheartened, she turned to leave, but halted as a creaking sound filled the air. From the branches above, a single acorn dislodged, landing softly in the snow at her feet.

In that frozen moment, something within Evelyn stirred. It wasn't the grand gesture she had hoped for, but in that tiny acorn lay the promise of new beginnings, of life persevering through the harshest of winters. Clutching the acorn, Evelyn smiled, her heart lighter. She knew then that the journey ahead was hers to forge, with or without the sign she had sought. The oak had listened, after all.

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Abraham Verninac

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Comments (3)

  • Laurette Baillieu4 days ago

    Abraham's article "Whispers to the Winter Oak" is like a cozy blanket on a chilly day, wrapping you in the warmth of poetic whispers and the comfort of nature's embrace. It's a delightful dance between words and emotion, truly captivating. So grab a cup of tea, curl up, and let Abraham's words whisk you away!

  • Lou Martin4 months ago

    Have you ever whispered your secrets to a winter oak tree? According to the captivating article by Abraham, these ancient guardians hold onto our words as their leaves rustle in agreement. I'm sure even the squirrels are spreading the gossip around the forest! This article truly branches out into a unique and enchanting world.

  • Alex H Mittelman 5 months ago

    Great work and well written!

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