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The Quiet Eyewitness

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By Abdul QayyumPublished about a month ago 4 min read
The Quiet Eyewitness
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The world of Mary Maloney was rendered in serene tones. The simple pleasures of home and the easygoing rhythms of everyday existence dominated her life. She was married to Patrick, a hardworking detective, and looked forward to his return from work every day. She also took satisfaction in the comfortable space she had made for him.

The evening of a cool autumn night was when the routine broke down. The soothing glow of the fireplace's warmth created dancing shadows that danced across the space. Mary was humming a gentle melody while working on super preparations. The deliberate ticking of the clock served as a constant reminder that time was passing. Patrick would be arriving home in a moment.

When he did show up, it didn't feel right. Patrick's normally lively demeanor appeared muted, as did his ponderous gait and hazy countenance. With a hushed exhale, he fell back into his chair. Mary, who was always on her toes, gave him a glass of whiskey, the amber drink reflecting her worry.

Her voice was soft and caring as she inquired, "Is everything alright, darling?"

Patrick's silence stretched awkwardly as he glanced at the drink. It seemed like an eternity before he spoke again, the warmth gone from his voice. "Mary, we need to talk."

The words hung there, menacing and unsettling. Mary felt a feeling of dread seeping into her thoughts as her heart quickened. She sat next to him, looking for comfort as her hand gently rested on his arm.

"I'm leaving you, Mary," Patrick announced in a tone as casual as if they were talking about the weather. "There's someone else."

The words were like a dagger to her heart, ripping apart the tranquil delusion she had taken such care to cultivate. She looked at him incomprehensibly, as though the truth of his treachery was too fantastical for her to process.

"But why?" she said in a broken voice.

Patrick looked away, suppressing his feelings. It simply is what it is. I apologize.

The once-comforting shadows were sinister, and the room seemed colder. Mary's thoughts were racing, emotions running wild. With a robotic gait, she got up and made her way to the kitchen. Her gaze landed on the leg of the lamb she intended to roast for supper. She lifted it up in a trance, its weight bringing her back to the present.

She went back to the living room without thinking, the leg of lamb still in her hands. Patrick was obviously distracted, as he hadn't moved. She felt an unexplainable resolve take hold of her as she got closer. She swung the frozen meat at his head in one quick stroke. The hit made a horrible sound, and Patrick fell forward, motionless.

The world seemed to stop for a little minute. The severity of what she had done struck Mary as she gazed at her husband's corpse. Just as panic was about to take hold of her, an odd serenity descended. She needed to think and move fast.

She put the lamb leg back in the oven, her only thought now being to keep herself safe. She practiced her lines, what she would say to the cops when they showed there. With purposeful accuracy, she prepared the scene.

Her voice trembled with real anxiety when she finally contacted the cops. "Please arrive as soon as possible! It's my spouse... I believe he has passed away."

The officers came over quickly, their professional manner unable to conceal their compassion for the distraught widow. They inspected the area and saw that there was no murder weapon present. Mary was a brilliant actress, convincing even the most doubtful viewers with her shock and anguish.

The investigators became increasingly peckish as the probe went on. Mary, who was always such a kind hostess, offered to prepare their meal. Unaware of the horrific irony, they nodded. The smell of roast lamb permeated the room, overpowering the whiff of dishonesty.

The officers ate dinner together and talked about the case, their theories mingling with the taste of delicious meat. Mary listened, her composure on the outside belying her internal struggle. Her determination was evident in every bite they shared and in every word they spoke, which served as a reminder of the fine line separating reality from delusion.

Ultimately, the inquiry produced no clear-cut proof. The murder weapon was never located, and the case is still open. Mary Maloney, the bereaved widow, was left to piece together her existence from the pieces of her broken world.

The events of that night replayed over in her head as she sat by herself in the peaceful house. Her peaceful environment was constantly reminded of the darkness that existed beneath its surface by the stifling silence that had once comforted her.

Thus, the lamb to the slaughter remained unnoticed, serving as a mute witness to a crime motivated by desperation and passion. Mary's life would never be the same since the memories of that terrible evening will always cast a shade over her innocence.

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About the Creator

Abdul Qayyum

I Abdul Qayyum is also a passionate advocate for social justice and human rights. I use his platform to shine a light on marginalized communities and highlight their struggles, aiming to foster empathy and drive positive change.

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