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The Agapean Revolution

Aiding Earth

By J.M. PowellPublished about a year ago 3 min read
Top Story - April 2023
The Agapean Revolution
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"There's no hope for the humans to change on their own. It just keeps getting worse. We have to do something."

"Azuk, why is it our responsibility?"

"Because, Ivir, we have the means, the numbers, and a great value and understanding of love. What if no other beings out there come by for a while. If they do come soon, what if they are not selfless enough to help them? I cannot sit around and watch the cruelty on Earth any longer."

"Okay," he sighed, "ready the ship to proceed to Earth."

"On it. What is the plan for when we arrive?"

"Unfortunately, we will have to imprison all government personnel and any family they want with them on our ship. We will take good care of them. I don't see any way for them to be free as we teach the humans how to act."

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"As we approach 6:00 p.m., still no votes have come in across the country. Mysterious forces continue to back the ongoing revolution," a reporter on the spaceship television announced.

Azuk watched the reporter with a smile. "Everything is coming together in preparation for our arrival," he told Ivir beside him. "The text messages we sent have gotten the attention of the humans, helping them learn how to look out for themselves by banding together as one."

"That's great. I love the plan to give all those that contribute to society unlimited money, while giving those that do not contribute a set amount so that they can still live comfortably. One key thing we will teach them is that their current way of making millions to play sports is ridiculous and does not count as a worthy contribution to society to qualify for the unlimited money under our vision. I think all of our changes will cause a rocky start at first because not many will still want to contribute to society when they are no longer required to work. Then, after new generations come forth under the lessons on self-love that we will teach the previous generations to pass down, everything will get better. Loving others starts with loving ourselves first. We will definitely have to contribute to their society in their place in the meantime."

"True. We will need to work until it is finished and let them know we will return if they revert to their old ways. The government personnel can only be released once they have learned how wrong it is to control people and exert power over others."

"I'm sorry I was against helping them when you first brought it to my attention. You continue to remind me that all intelligent species similar to us and these humans exist so that they can be of service to others. It is the only way to learn how to rise above the pain that comes from the positive and negative exchange of all energy in the universe. When we know love, we flow freely instead of resisting the natural energy exchange everywhere. We see that negative energy will always change to positive energy when we understand its purpose."

"Do not worry. You're forgiven, as always."

"So, how will we justify forcing them to follow our plan. You know they will try to say it is odd that we are controlling them while we are saying control is wrong."

"We will explain that the reason behind control determines if it should be done. When operating from a perspective of love, controlling others is sometimes necessary in order to help set them on the right path. Their type of control over others is from a perspective of power and evil and that is why it is wrong."

"You always know how to put things in words. You are a great world leader. I am proud to travel the universe with you on our mission to teach worlds agape love."

Author Note: This story began with a microfiction piece I originally published on my fiction Facebook page on September 2, 2022, as you can see in the photo and link below. I have expanded it so that I can enter it into the Sky's the Limit Challenge.

9/2/2022 Post on Fiction from the Heart, my fiction Facebook page at the link below

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My passion is to spread what it means to love.

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Comments (7)

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago

    This was soooooo awesomeeee! Congratulations on your Top Story!

  • Congratulations on your Top Story😉✨💯🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉

  • ❤️

  • Shari Khanabout a year ago

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  • Samia Afraabout a year ago

    Agape love is the answer! I'd like to see another chapter. Great read :)

  • A whimsical utopian vision. So how soon do you figure Azuk & Ivir will be coming back. You know, the human race wouldn't be so bad if it wasn't for all those people it involves (including me, unfortunately).

  • J. R. Loweabout a year ago

    Congrats on Top Story!! This part made me chuckle, “One key thing we will teach them is that their current way of making millions to play sports is ridiculous and does not count as a worthy contribution to society to qualify for the unlimited money under our vision.” I agree 😂

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