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Stones of Salvation

Hope on the Summer Solstice

By Gael MacLeanPublished 4 days ago Updated about 7 hours ago 4 min read
Scorched earth and ancient stones. Author created in Midjourney.

On June 21st, 2024, the sun refused to set over Willowbrook. The temperature at noon was 103°F. By 6 PM, it had dropped to 98°F. The last measurable rainfall was 272 days ago.

Mayor Evelyn Harper stood on a makeshift plywood stage in the town square. She was 68. Or would be in August. Her hands trembled imperceptibly as she gripped the lectern, its peeling varnish sticky in the oppressive heat.

"Friends," she began, her voice carrying the practiced steadiness of a woman accustomed to delivering bad news, "tonight we revive a tradition long forgotten."

I had known Evelyn since high school. She had been class president, homecoming queen, the girl most likely to succeed. Now she stood before a town on the brink of extinction, peddling hope wrapped in superstition.

The crowd shifted. A collective rustle of denim and sweat-dampened cotton. Some clutched paper fans from the Methodist church basement—relics of more prosperous times. Mrs. Patel from the convenience store fingered her gold wedding band. Farmer Johnson's calloused hands were empty—he had nothing left to hold.

"Our ancestors," Evelyn continued, each word measured and deliberate, "believed that on the summer solstice, the veil between worlds grew thin. They performed a ritual to honor the earth and ensure a bountiful harvest."

A murmur rippled through the gathered townsfolk. It was tinged with equal parts skepticism and desperate hope. Like me. Hope, as Evelyn well knew, was a dangerous thing in a dying town. She had campaigned on hope three years ago. The irony of turning to superstition now was not lost on her.

Lily Chen, 16, stood at the edge of the crowd. Her dark eyes were fixed on the ancient stone circle that had always been there—unremarkable to her until now. The circle predated the town, predated the first European settlers. No one knew who had built it or why. Now it would be the focal point of their desperate attempt to change their fortunes.

Lily's grandmother, Wei, appeared beside her, smelling of ginger and resignation. "You feel it too, don't you?" Wei asked, her weathered hand finding Lily's. I was skeptical.

Lily nodded, unable to articulate the peculiar tension humming beneath her skin. The air crackled with possibility or madness. In Willowbrook, the line between the two had grown increasingly blurred. The town disappeared. Only the stones remained.

Wei prays for good outcome. Author created in Midjourney.

I remember another summer solstice, years ago, when the town had gathered for a different reason. It was 1969. We watched grainy footage of men walking on the moon. Our faces illuminated by the silver glow of television screens. We had believed that anything was possible. Now, we gathered around stones older than our understanding. Grasping at rituals we didn't truly believe in.

As the sun hung stubbornly above the horizon, casting long shadows across the faded storefronts and abandoned farms, the people of Willowbrook formed a ring around the stone circle. Their hands joined, faces flickering in the light of hastily constructed torches. The flames danced, revealing glimpses of hope and fear etched into tired faces.

Mayor Evelyn stood in the center, clutching a leather-bound book she'd found in the library's restricted section. "The ritual," she announced, her voice carrying on the warm breeze, "calls for an offering from each family. Something precious, freely given."

One by one, they stepped forward. Mrs. Patel removed her wedding band, tears glistening in her eyes as she set it down. Farmer Johnson placed a handful of seeds in the center – the last of his heirloom tomatoes. Each offering was a piece of their history, a fragment of identity sacrificed to an uncertain future.

Lily watched as her father hesitated, then pulled out the pocket watch that had belonged to his father. And his father before him. When it was their turn, Wei guided Lily to the center. From her pocket, she produced a small jade figurine – a dragon, intricately carved.

"This has been in our family for generations," Wei whispered. Her hands shook as she pressed it into Lily's palm.

In that moment, standing on the precipice of either salvation or further despair, I understood a fundamental truth about Willowbrook, about America itself. We were a people caught between nostalgia for a past that never truly existed and a future they couldn't begin to imagine. And on this longest day of the year, we were willing to sacrifice our most precious possessions to an ancient god we didn't believe in.

Because the alternative – doing nothing – was unbearable.

The sun lingered, watching. Waiting. In Willowbrook, the ritual began.

No one spoke of what would happen if it didn't work. No one dared imagine waking up tomorrow to find the offerings gone and the fields still barren. They clung to hope because it was all they had left.

I stood at the edge of the circle, notebook in hand, recording the death – or perhaps the rebirth – of a town I once called home. The air vibrated with anticipation—or desperation. In Willowbrook, it was becoming harder to tell the difference.

I realized perhaps the true power lies in the power to believe in hope. And that was what we needed to survive these hard times. Hope.

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Gael MacLean

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Comments (5)

  • Dawnxisoul393arta day ago

    Great job, weekend, read it again today, your captivating storytelling truly immerses us in the atmosphere of Willowbrook, the vivid descriptions and poignant characterizations bring the scene to life, making us feel the weight of the town's struggles, Mayor Evelyn Harper's resilience and the community's collective hope, are beautifully portrayed, your prose is both evocative and thought-provoking, leaving a lasting impression, well done, and a nice weekend!

  • Thank you very much for sharing, love your works, hope to read more, subscribed.

  • The juxtaposition of tradition, superstition, and the weight of responsibility on Evelyn's shoulders adds depth to the narrative. The internal conflict between skepticism and desperate hope resonates strongly, leaving us eager to discover the outcome, wonderful!

  • Hannah Moore3 days ago

    That paragraph about the nature of America- nostalgia for what wasnt, and an in ability to imagine what will be - I think perhaps that is all of us sometimes.

  • "Hope breed eternal misery" is what Spencer Hastings from Pretty Little Liars used to say. The desperation in your story was so palpable. They were so desperate to even do something for a God they didn't believe in. Loved your story!

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