Shimmers Between Worlds
How To See Beyond
The ice crystals swirl in the freezing air, snow forming before his face. As the wind picks up, the snow shards move faster and faster in a flurry around his head, making him lose track of his surroundings. Not knowing which way is up and which is right, he shuts his eyes. When he opens them, he can see the image forming, clear as it can be through the blizzard happening before this wall of ice - he sees himself from the back, trading goods at an outdoor market - in another world, another life. He sees where he is somewhere else. Another gust of wind and a new flurry of snow, reveals the image of him cozy in a cabin, before a warming fireplace, holding his newborn daughter, his wife sitting beside them - a family he doesn't have here.
The snow may confuse; it may dizzy one's directions and leave one feeling next-to-blind, but it also brings an unmatched clarity. The icy clarity of knowing what could have been is, just not where you stand. A glimpse into the infinite what-could-have-beens can be seen in the snowflakes' rainbow reflections whirling around one's head.
Since he stumbled upon this place of enchantment, he has returned every time there is word of a storm. At the top of the hill, facing the wall of ice he can see far and wide. He won't limit himself anymore to just glimpses - for a glimpse of happiness isn't enough.
About the Creator
Calista Marchand-Nazzaro
Always learning and always evolving. I’m a creative, an idea person, a thinker, a dreamer, and working on being a doer. Many interests. Varied content. Food. Sustainability. Comedy. Poetry. Music.
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Comments (11)
A wonderful story!
Congratulations on top story :)
Love every bit of it
Congrats on Top Story!🥳
Truly wonderful writing. A metaphorical lesson on life that hits deep. Loved it. A very, very well deserved Top Story!!
Marvelous work! Keep it going—congrats!
I love the idea of this. Great microfiction. I'm tempted to head out into a snowstorm now.
So many stories about being lost and taken by the snow, I love how this gives an alternate perspective. A thrilling idea.
Brilliant & congratulations on Top Story too!!!♥️♥️💕
Amazing story! Congrats on top story!
beautiful writing Please keep it up