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Sea of Blood
Wednesday 19th June, Story #171/366
Blushing, he drew back. He wanted her, (ohsomuch!) the softness of her was impossible.
Always the same dance: swaying closer to the boundary, sliding a toe over, pulling back. One day I'll go too far. We won't be able to stop.
He made her feel irresistable... and yet, he resisted. Panting, trembling, longing naked in his eyes. He could neither do it, nor leave her in peace.
Some might have accused her of teasing. Or brought her a posy and a ring, begging for her hand and her whole life with it.
He made her feel so good, so safe... so she hated that she had to ask.
"Joe, why don't you ask me to marry you?"
"If I could marry anyone," his eyes were dead serious, "it'd be you. Only you. If I lived a hundred lives, I'd choose you in every one of them."
Her heart didn't know whether to sing or sink. To be loved that way, to hear it, to know it. Not cheap words to weasel under her skirts, either. Heck she, the shy one, had started pushing him, wanting more... Always he rebuffed her with excuses.
His Adams apple bobbed.
"If I tell you, you'll think I'm crazy."
"I won't."
He chewed his lip.
When I started working in the stables, I was only a boy. One night, I went to fetch two horses in from the rain. The soldier unloading the cart didn't see me. Murmuring to this huge bundle, he was. The covering came undone and I saw... a woman. Naked. Belly huge and straining. For a moment, a shiny fish-tail where her legs should be. I hurried to hide in the abandoned bathhouse before he could spot me... but that's where he brought her. He left and I heard the locks slide home. She slithered into the pool.
It was... unreal. That tail, sometimes there, sometimes not. Storm howling, with snatches of eerie song. In the moonlight her skin looked blue, like the summer sea, and pale where it was stretched tight. She suffered and heaved and thrashed. Then they cut a baby out of her belly, and she died in a sea of her own blood.
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Word count, according to Google and excluding note: 366
Submitted on Wednesday 19th June at 21.37
Edited because I lost some formatting when I copied over and didn't notice.
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Comments (10)
This was heartbreaking and beautiful all in one breath!! Great work here LC!
"Sing or sink" and "sea of her own blood", I especially loved those wordplay! Awesome story!
Was the baby her maybe? Ohhh, he loves her and wants to protect her... hmmm. Great story!
Yikes! Best birth control ever! I think seeing something like that would put me off too! Great story. So well written.
Oh wow, what an ending, LC! Now I wanna know what happened to the mermaid's baby.
Mind twisting! Does this mean mermaids can't give birth naturally? A strange tail indeed.
What Hannah said.And there’s always something not quite right with a perfect guy!
Something definitely fish going on here! I was hooked.
Very Hans Christian Andersen of you! Liked the story! 🤓
Yeah, I mean, I'd be scared of knocking a girl up after that.