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Peter‘s Love

I Hear You Darling

By Mariann CarrollPublished 3 days ago Updated 3 days ago 4 min read
Peter‘s Love
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2024

It’s been five months since Peter broke up with his first love. He even wrote a song about her.

“Peter, when are you going to put our relationship over your love of music?” Jennifer asked in tears.

Jennifer invested in her relationship with Peter but she is not getting younger. She want to start a family.

“Darling just give me a couple more years and we can start our family. We plan our beautiful wedding in Maldives on my private yacht. We will fly our family and friends on my jet plane.” Peter pleaded with his love and best friend.

Jennifer had enough of waiting for Peter to pop the question. They started living separate life.

2025

Jennifer getting married in the summer. Peter found out from celebrity news radio. Peter was very happy for Jennifer. He could not promise her marriage because his singing career was raising again.

Two weeks after he heard the news, he received a wedding invitation from Jennifer to his surprised. He was not planning to go. It was to painful.

Peter woke up from his sleep. A voice coming from the huge mirror by his bed.

“Wake up Peter! Come to me Peter!” The voice coming from the mirror woke Peter up from his deep sleep.

Peter was dreaming of him marrying Jennifer but it faded away when he heard a soft voice calling him.

He open his eyes, from his sleep. He remember he was chatting online with his fans. An event he have for his fans once a month.

“Peter come. Come here Peter.” The soft voice called to Peter again.

“Where are you and who are you?” Peter asked still trying to wake up his brain.

“Come to the mirror, I am here. Come join me Peter.” The soft voice mesmerized Peter going to the mirror.

Peter got sucked in the mirror. Peter was in place near a beautiful beach.

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There was a hut surrounded by beautiful tropical flowers. The breeze felt wonderful. Peter explore his surroundings. He wonder how he is going to get back to his mansion.

“Peter come here!” The soft voice was coming from the hut.

He turn towards the hut. He saw a beautiful tan woman with long hair to her waist. She was wearing a short yellow skirt that hugged her luscious hips. She was not very tall. She was wearing a red bikini top over her tiny breast.

He walked towards her. When he reach her, the top of head reach his shoulders. He was about five seven in height.

“I want to get back to my mansion. I have a big concert tomorrow.” Peter told the beautiful lady.

“ Hello, I am Fe, Peter. I made you a tray of your favorite sea food. You need a break from your music. I even made your favorite cocktail.” Beautiful Fe lured him to the table in the hut that’s full of delicious sea food dishes.

Peter sat down on the bamboo chair. The woman of the island sat next to him. She pour the cocktail concoction in an empty coconut shell. She place a bamboo straw and a red flower in it.

He was hungry so he dug into the sea food on top of the banana leaves. He found the sea food fresh and delicious. The Cocktail was excellent to taste. He never had anything like it before.

He finished eating and he started to asked her how he can get back.

“You do not need to worry about getting back. You need to worry about your priorities.” She told him.

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Dream1

Peter fell asleep from the cocktail. He dream of marrying Jennifer. He had two beautiful children with her. Peter stopped having concerts around the world but spent time with his family, friends and his success foundation to care for the needy around the world. The only people he sings to was his family. He produced a family song album but he stop doing promotional tours.

Dream2

Peter stayed stuck on the island with beautiful Fe and he had two beautiful kids with her. He enjoyed the peaceful island life. He thought his kids to sing. He had Fe irresistible cocktail before bed. Life was good but he miss his friends and family. He still tried to find away out of the island.

Dream 3

Peter was very busy promoting success concerts around the world. His dog Gino was always there to greet him when he got home from his concerts.

Peter married his dedicated fan Wilma. He was fifty when he got married. Wilma could not have kids. They adopted two kids a boy and a girl. Peter’s whole family come with him on the road to his concerts. Peter had over 9 platinum and gold album produced. He wrote new songs that made it to number one billboard songs consecutively.

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Peter woke up from his dreaming and he was back in his mansion with his dog Gino. Next to his bed was Jennifer’s wedding invitation. She will have her wedding tomorrow.

Will Peter stop the wedding? Will he fulfill his music dream? How do you think this story should end? Write your comments below .

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About the Creator

Mariann Carroll

Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.

Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .

fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living

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Comments (7)

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran3 days ago

    I like the third dream. Peter should focus on his music career. No woman is worth sacrificing that. Jennifer is too selfish. A good woman would always support her man achieve his dreams. Loved your story!

  • WOW this is quite the surreal story!!!

  • Tiffany Gordon 3 days ago

    So excited 2 see you posting again! Such great storytelling. It reminded me of the choose your own adventure stories that I enjoyed reading when I was younger! Great job! I think that Peter and Wilma are best suited because you don't want to have any regrets in life. If he doesn't pursue music he may regret it and end up resenting Jennifer as a result.

  • Good story Mariann. I see you are branching out and trying different things. Keep up the great work!!!

  • I think Peter should marry Wilma, after all they are more similar that way. Nice thought-provoking story!

  • Mark Gagnon3 days ago

    Mariann, I enjoyed your story. Everyone constantly has choices to make, sometimes they work, sometimes not so much. I hope you don't mind one critique to help smooth the story a little. There are several places where you used the wrong tense. Other than that the story was great.

  • Babs Iverson3 days ago

    Love your creative romance story!!! Since he keep Jennifer waiting, she deserves happiness. Peter can stay on the island with Fe. 💕❤️❤️

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