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Exorcism

Horror fiction

By RabiyaR ButtPublished 2 days ago 1 min read

Ava, had always been an actively happy individual, but one day, she wakes up feeling. . . different. He was asking questions she couldn’t answer but she had been having a sense of a black core deep within her, a feeling of an entity hiding in the shadow of her consciousness.

Towards the evening it became much more distinct. The light that had been in Ava’s eyes went out, and her limbs began to saccade. She could hear a voice that would speak to her and tell her to do dreadful things which would be horrible to the people around.

Unfortunately, Ava was unable to fully cast the spell of exorcism and still felt like a demon was inside of her. He attempted to pray, to meditate, to do anything to keep her mind off this past, but nothing appeared to work.

People close to Ama stayed with her waiting and they all looked scared as she was behaving erratically as the sun set. He and a boy attempted to stop her but she was no longer in control of her body as observable from Ava’s gestures.

And so it appeared that all chance had passed when a good senile priest appeared on the scene. He began to pray for Ava, Made the sign of the cross on her head and shoulders then touched her, telling the evil spirit to come out of her.

Gradually, all the mist in Ava’s eyes disappeared; her hands stopped shaking; and she was in full control of her faculties again. The possession was over and she was released at last.

Yes, Vampire Hunter, there was something like gratitude or happiness because Ava cried and hugged her friends, thanking the priest. And from that particular day, she learnt that she was not a lone person in the community who is tormented by demons and therefore an assurance struck her that there is always hope, whoever shrugs off the demons.

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RabiyaR Butt

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I love to write. Writing is an art and I want to excel my skills with passion. Just a pinch of effort with a plethora of hard work and a strong determination in the way can help in the journey.

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  • Dawnxisoul393art2 days ago

    The desperation felt by Ava as she tries various methods to rid herself of the demon is palpable. The introduction of the senile priest brings hope and adds a mysterious element to the narrative. You have effectively built tension and left us eagerly anticipating the resolution. Great job!

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