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Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs.

Snow Black.

By Dawn EarnshawPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 5 min read

One day Snow White a very special little girl with a rather controlling mother in law, who despised her, as she desired all Snow Whites fathers love and affection for herself. preceeds to send her into the woods to collect daffodils.

Secretly she organises a woodcutter to chop off her head, only what she didn’t count on was Snow Whites ability to infect love and light on people’s hearts.

The Woodcutter points her into a different realm of reality that will change Snow Whites life forever.

Suddenly seven dwarfs started to ensure her safety and well-being. They act as her guardians, watching over her and providing a sense of security in the dangerous world. Their love for her innocent nature kept them committed to keeping her out of harm's way.

The seven dwarfs offered Snow White emotional support to her in a time of distress. They provided and lent comfort, a listening ear, and offered words of encouragement when she was feeling down and facing a challenge. Their love was so that they searched for a potion to soften her Mother in Law heart towards her and demonstrated their willingness to be there for her and offer solace during sad moments.

Through their kindness and generosity they approached the Queen of Hearts who was known to be ruthless in her actions and had very little sympathy or empathy towards anyone. They went out of their way to make Snow White to feel loved and appreciated, such as bringing her gifts or helping her with daily tasks. These small gestures showcase their affection and their desire to bring joy to her life.

The dwarfs enjoy spending time with Snow White fostering a sense of companionship and camaraderie, by engaging in activities together, sharing meals, and create a warm and welcoming environment in their cottage.

Their love was reflected in the joy they found in each other's presence and the sense of family life they created. The dwarfs whilst mining didn’t realise that the Queen of hearts found Snow White and gave her a poisoned Apple and Snow White fell into a deep sleep after biting the poisoned apple, the dwarfs remained by her side, refusing to leave her alone. Their unwavering commitment and willingness to put her well-being above their own needs exemplified their profound love for her.

In his distraught and guilty sense of self Mr Sneezy the bravest of the seven dwarfs embarked upon a mythical journey of a rabbit hole that was meant to hold a powerful potion that would awaken any soul that had been put to sleep under a poisoned spell of potion.

Secretly he was feeling very insecure and fearful but he knew he had to face his fears for Snow White future.

He came across a caterpillar who was smoking majestic mushrooms in a joint, the caterpillar offered Sneezy a few puffs of this and started a conversation with him and tells him that there was a Duchess who sneezed a lot, who owns a Cheshire Cat that grins a lot, who owned answers in a golden pot.

Before Sneezy knew it he had fallen down the rabbit hole and was so tiny, looking in the mirror reflecting him as a hatter, he questioned whether he was as mad as one!

The last thing Sneezy remembered was gazing into the abyss when he lost control and slipped. By the time he regained consciousness, he found himself spiraling down a dark vertiginous tunnel, clueless of where he was heading.

He went through another door and in front of him was a chair, leaning against a table, it looked drunk, or am I ? He thought to himself.

Stacks upon stacks of books lay at the side of it , so he climbed upon them, onto a table, where there was a chess board. A man dressed as a guard was moving a chess piece forward, while a soldier shot his rifle and a Queen dressed in a red puffed hearts dress, shouting “off with his head!” Sneezy observed the Queen and her actions were of a controlling, dictating manner whom didn’t want to loose at anything, Sneezy decided that she was not to be approached while in this manner, when he saw that she saw him in her peripheral view , with a look of intrigue.

The next thing Sneezy knew she had ordered the guard to arrest him , he quickly slipped back down the books.

Sneezy quickly realised that this was meant to be the Queen who had the magical potion to awaken Snow White; he was fearful but started to see another world behind her through the window, how bizarre and crawling back down to the ground he grew and grew.

He was so big that he knew he wouldn’t be able to get out of the door or window!

He then proceeded down a hallway, the walls were painted with flowers and mushrooms; that’s it he thought the mushrooms have distorted my mind, I’m big, I’m brave, I’m bold, I’m Mr Sneezy with a big cheesy face- I can win this Quest and find the potion myself.

Whoosh, within seconds he was on an elevator going upwards; there was no roof and the sky looked magnificent in all its rainbow glory.

He proceeded to the left of him as there was no right ; then he proceeded right as there was no left, there shone a red light, he followed a yellow brick road and a Scarecrow appeared, “Oh no “he said, “am I hallucinating again “

“No”replies the Scarecrow, “ I’m here to take you to the Professor “ Scarecrow told Sneezy he longed to have a brain so he could think, his head was full of straw, Sneezy empathetic to his plight explaining why he was there had fallen and faced many obstacles and challenges making him a braver Dwarf than ever before and maybe if Scarecrow was able to do the same he would just develop knowledge and understanding.

They proceeded down this yellow brick road and came to a castle where a professor lived, he asked “have you come for the magic awakening potion?”

“Oh yes” replied Sneezy. Feeling rather relieved and tired by now; the Professor seemed rather abrupt and rude, not really interested in small talk or listening to any of the Quest he had been on, not realising he was then back in the forest making his way to the woods and walking into the cottage.

“I’ve got the potion” he proudly said as he walked to Snow White he kissed he on the lips and said “don’t worry Snow I’ve got the cure”

With this the room filled with white clouds of smoke, swirling around and Sneezy turned into a Prince and Snow White woke up, asking “is everything alright?”

“Now it is replied the Prince, we just need to get you home and give your mother in law this heart warming potion “

Her Mother in law became extremely loving towards Snow White and realising the error of her ways asked for forgiveness from Snow White , whom Snow White was so happy just to be able to become a loving family and she had only one wish, she disclosed this to her family and the Prince that she wanted to become known as Snow Black as White seemed very much like pushing away her friends- with not having any stories of the beautiful black friends she had, she wanted them to feel included.

With this as the Prince didn’t let her know as it was meant to be a wedding surprise that the Professor had given him, he gave her the wish she granted from another potion and the whole kingdom with this, they all lived happily ever after.

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Dawn Earnshaw

Loves writing short stories and poems - learning punctuation and Grammar.ADHD

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