Shrek Forever After
A Critique Challenge entry
Shrek 4 isn't a bad movie, just a very disjointed one.
The only way for it to make any kind of sense is to throw out all the Character Growth and Plot Development of the three movies that came before it.
A better title would have been: "Shrek's Midlife Crisis"
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Natasja Rose
I've been writing since I learned how, but those have been lost and will never see daylight (I hope).
I'm an Indie Author, with 30+ books published.
I live in Sydney, Australia
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I honestly don’t remember part four very well … but that image if them all together made me happy! 😁 Uh nostalgia!
Brilliant critique!!! Love it!!!
Lol, midlife crisis! Loved your review!
Sometimes, we push things a little (or a lot) too far in pursuit of the almighty dollar.
It was not a good for a children ‘s animation, show. It was very dark for younger children to understand.
Yeah it wasn't the best movie, was it. You putt a lot of information in 50 words. Nicely done.