Hatfields and McCoys – this one. Uninvited Romeo crashes a rave. Meets fair Juliet, from wrong side of tracks. Cupid owns both. Juliet’s BFF helps lovers, iconic balcony scene. Mistaken identity leads to Romeo’s banishment. Juliet goes with Padre’s plan. Text failed to send. Families grieve, forgive all but two.
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Love the hatfields and mccoys reference
Dear D-bud ~ Lovely selection ~ *Just want to say what a terrific heart you have for always being there for our little Village; including me. J-bud
That was a modern Romeo and Juliet story worth reading. Great imagery use of words 💕
Wonderful absolutely wonderful!!! Brief and captures the complete story!!! Loving it, Dana!!!
Great critique, Dana! Excellent brief, yet full recap! 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽
Great critique! You def packed it in there. 👋🏻
Didn't see it, but I got the picture. Great review, Bravo.
'Text failed to send' ... love it! Love the critique. Incredibly well done, Dana 💕😊
This is great, I love it! "Text failed to send" is my favorite, it resumes a great and also stupid thing at the same time !
well written & filled with all the juicy plot details! Very well done!
Brilliant and succinct! So much in here ❤️
Whoaaa, you managed to pack all that into 50 words! You're phenomenal!
That was really well done, one of the best I've seen.
Beautiful 🤩💯🫶🏾‼️
Baz Luhrman could not have said it better.
Wow, that was a lot info packed in there. Great review, Dana.
The Hatfields and McCoys saga captivated in 50 words. Well done ❤️ Love it!