He's a work of art, but only on the surface. Deep down, where nobody can see, he's horrid and rotten. His portrait knows and reflects his sins back to him. What would our portraits look like? Dorian's story certainly makes us wonder. But blissful ignorance helps us sleep at night.
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Brin J.
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By Ali bukhariabout 20 hours ago in Critique
Comments (7)
Marvelous critique! This is one that has been on my reading list for ages.
I was about to say spot on, but Dana stole it. So...this is an awesome critique, Brin. You captured everything about this tale.
I agree with ema - your critique is spot on and lovely written!
This novel expresses the worst side of human vanity, a masterpiece. Great critique!
Ooooo, I gotta get my hands on this! Excellent review!
intriguing
Great little critique! Thank you for writing it!