A sinister-sounding story about the opulent, hedonistic excesses of LA nightlife. It is a haunting tale of a journey from innocence to experience, of overindulgence in sensual pastimes, set to music. A driving rhythm, rasping lead vocal, rich harmonies, and a killer dueling guitar solo, seductively beckon the awestruck listener.
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Liam Ireland
I Am...whatever you make of me.
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I loved your review more than the song! Awesome work!
Ahh nice choice!!! This one crossed my mind before sleep last night but I forgot today 🙈 Not going to bother now… this is perfect!