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Eighth grade

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By Mark GrahamPublished about a month ago 1 min read
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Eighth grade my last year in what is known as middle school aka junior high. This is a transition year for most students for high school starts the next year. This is year that was all about learning more about the state that you live in from its' history to its' government. Our voices were all changing for the boys and the girls, and you would think that some us were actually left behind again for some reason some students did not fit for good reason (they seemed to adult looking) in many ways. Our various talents were tested from writing, singing or playing an instrument, or drawing and painting along with the practical arts of mechanical drawing and/or home economics. When I was in school, boys had industrial arts and girls had home economics. In the seventh grade my homeroom was the home economics room and I saw how to operate a sewing machine along with a washer and dryer. I knew how to cook and clean up the kitchen at home for I was a latchkey child to a point.

Emotions run high

intrinsically and extrinsically

granting

how

things and ideas changed

heuristically during

grade eight

readying the

adjustments made

directly and indirectly

educating for the near and far future.

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Mark Graham

I am a person who really likes to read and write and to share what I learned with all my education. My page will mainly be book reviews and critiques of old and new books that I have read and will read. There will also be other bits, too.

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Comments (2)

  • Muraliabout a month ago

    This is an awesome critique! The acrostic is great too.

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Whoaaaa, you knew how to cook at that age? That's so cool!

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