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Can't Sleep 🌚 💤
I Freestyled this Piece some time ago, but I decided to share it with you here on Vocal Platform😉 I tried to put it into writing 📝 but maybe I will do another Rendition…Check out My video below⬇️
I CANT SLEEP 🌙
I was wondering how could I explain the Conceptual Story that was soon to become My Poetry-
I was sitting and freestyling so I decided to record it📹 although there is still work to accomplish here is what I recorded…
I am No DJ, but I Will Post Another One Similarly Acapella and maybe an Acoustics Beat… any Dj’s That Would like to Collaborate let me know 😉 📝 I could use a Nice Spin on This Track 🎙️ 🎶 🎼 I made the Beat on the other one but still could use more help 🆘 😁 ♥️ 💬
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CAN’T SLEEP 🌚
Sometimes I can't sleep at night 😴
When you are always
On my mind,
Why can't we
Let it go,
If it's not working?
I wish my love
Could lift you up…
Is it redundant yet?
Why, couldn't it be you and me?
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I stood there
by your side
If sh!% popped off
I was ready to ride,
There is not
A dude alive
Who could get in-between
Real Love
I tried to sweep you
Off Your feet
But you tried to
Play me
I'm sitting here thinking 💭
Ain't life crazy?
I focused on
Letting down my guard,
To show you all of me,
But you were scandalous
Searching for another
Homie…
Back then I knew that
You were not for me…
But I said F$@? That!
I need change,
My Thrill comes
From a good
Challenge…
Only to find out
We couldn't
Find balance between
You and me
And our own desires…
What sets me on fire 🔥
Is dealing with a liar…
Some people
Are just pretensions
But I was born a leader…
We all have to learn
And Grow,
That I understood
We all need guidance…
If you can't see
Pass your own Mistakes,
I have to go…
Because my soul
You ain't
Gonna break,
That's a “No”.
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Sometimes I can't
Sleep at night 🌚
When you're always
On my mind…
Why, can't we
Let it go if it's
Not working?
I wished that
My love could
Lift you up,
Is it Redundant yet?
why couldn't it
Be forever you
And me?
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I just included my poem at the end of the video 📼 poetry link 🔗 will be posted below…⬇️
UP LATE 👀🖤
I stay up late sometimes…
practicing on my rhymes…
Lord if you awaken me
Then I must try my opportunities…
At least
Just one more time…
Walking alone at night
No worries
No fights…
I’ll find a spot
And spark some Gas…
Sit somewhere High
And watch the Moon in the sky…
I’ll go for a long drive, Just me and some tunes and my Attitude!
I need to let my hair blow in the wind…
Even if it’s just for tonight!
No stress just Relaxation and I close my eyes…
I stay Up Late sometimes and I don’t know why??
I can’t sleep no matter how hard I Try…
No stress just Relaxation and I close my Eyes…
Noted 📝
If I were a DJ, I would Speed The Track and Maybe throw in an old-school R&B hip-hop Beat for the Background…
Audio🎙️:
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Poetry
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About the Creator
HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Comments (13)
Wonderful, Lonzo!!! Love it!!!
Great poem. Even better getting to hear you perform it. My favorite rendition was the final one here (& no, not because the picture is of you coming out of the shower wrapped in a towel, lol).
Woah! I loved this. The freestyle and your voice. So creative. And you are such a pretty boy. I bet you stay in drama because all the guys want you LOL. 🤍
Whoaaaa! This was so freaking amazing! Loved your videos!
So great. Loved the video. You're killing it lately :)
Look at my beautiful Scorpio bro go! You snapped on these! You got him all the way together! I love it! BRAVO!👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
Loui can sing! Love makes us do the unimaginable😊.
💓💖👍
❤
So nice to be in love. When I can’t sleep, I get up and grade my student’ works.
Fantastic piece, Lonzo! Loved hearing your voice here- it’s amazing!!! The first video was super cool, and the other two as well! Great work on this–what a treat to read and listen! 💞💫
nice song, gud job my friend
lol I enjoyed the rhymes! “Just me and my attitude” was so on point and relatable. I love long night drives.